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 …Soul is detaching…

…Breath is scratching…

…Pulse is catching…

…Blood is dispatching…

…These wounds tattering my body are so soul-snatching…

 

This life is broken…and my last words hurt when spoken… 

I will not be awoken… 

Death is my only token…

 

My last tear is shed…though you fail to witness it because it mixes with the rain overhead…

I watch you bow your head…because you know in any second…I shall be dead…

Departing with a soft smile I cleverly misled… 

Dying with a grin when my heart is cut of the final thread… 

My very last will was to leave you believing everything was fine instead…of merely this innocent pool of red...

 

"Boy oh boy, the price of freedom is steep..."

For Zack Fair (Fanal Fantasy: Crisis Core) ...:iconglompingzacklaplz:

I was really bored and...yeah...
The poem 'tis lame...

*runzawaytocryforeverz*
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Zack (c) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core
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Radi-Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist
ZACKKK! NOOOOOO! :iconcryingplz:

Oh was really good. :aww:
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconsnivelplz: thank you...
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Radi-Wolf Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Someone needs a hug. :iconsupertighthugplz:
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconk-hugplz:
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gammbitt Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow that is so deep and sadly beautiful...
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks sis!! :iconyaaayplz::iconmegabrofistplz::iconyaaayplz:
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CitySiren Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
....That was so....:iconuu-plz:
SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!:iconwatyoumeanplz:

Your writing is so heart-gripping! :iconyuicryplz:
:iconruncryplz: *Runs away to go hug her Cloud plushie*:cling:
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol thanks sis! :iconwipetearsplz:*quicklydropsyourCloudplushieandfleez*
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CitySiren Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome! :iconsmilingcronaplz:

And as for that last part...
:iconimfuriousplz::iconhmmphplz::iconkyleoniplz:
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconufufuplz:
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ladyphantomofmusic Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Wow, I love it. The poem is so good.
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much!!! :heart::iconpunipuniplz::heart:
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ladyphantomofmusic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Your welcome. I love poetry so I can appriciate this.
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SweetNSpice112 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why do you think it is lame? If you were to change it how would you go about the change? I liked the way you composed each line. Give yourself more credit.
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Kittyotic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awwwwwwww! Thanks! :iconrubcheeksplz:
I am a hard critic on myself...but it's a habit I can't break...:icondizzyblushplz:
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SweetNSpice112 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know the feeling, I can be hard on myself as well, but also learn to give yourself some praise too.
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